Frat Boy Fantasy

If I was a teenager and lived in America I would probably have enjoyed this book but I am not and do not, so I find myself not enjoying this book.

Like most examples of this genre the premises concept is good but ruined by its execution. The main character is a college age frat boy which the author interprets to mean a guy whose head is in the gutter thinking with his penis or whose head is in the clouds with serious delusions and lack of ability to think of the consequences of his actions.

The name of the title is a pun on procreation in reference to the fact the MC has sex magic. More accurately he is a power cloner who copies the magic of any woman he beds at their current power level. Read that again and understand what that means. Now understand that in the first chapter that the MC straight kills one of his would be teachers because of a "misunderstanding" and it is just written off as shit happens.

He finds out that the woman he bedded to get his first magic is the noble daughter of a much feared prison warden with death magic and the first thing he tries to do when seeing her is gloat (thank her) about how he has gotten a copy of her magic thanks to them smashing and he was going to do it in the packed canteen, the only reason he didn't die there is because someone with sense stopped him.

It is heavily implied that high elves kill his sort of mage on sight but their representative is a hot girl so you know how that's going to ends.

This is the level of plot armour that the MC enjoys, if you are fine reading a Randy Sue novel go ahead I won't stop you. But don't expect anything more than college humour and innuendoes packed into every chapter.

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Great listening

it was great with, and the referencing to other works was a brilliant piece of writing

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Great,simply great

Wot to say, wot to say, ohh yes, it's a really good book and worth listening to.

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it's a good book

I really liked the book but I think it was too small could have had a little more text

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exceptional

This book is exceptional, well written and extremely enjoyable. Hope the rest are as good.

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Wishfulfillment at its worst

This story just feels like an incel writing a wishfulfillment story. Every time MC meets a person, every person he's met so far is a woman except a skeleton, he checks them out and wants to sleep with them. Every girl is seen as an object for him to have and the story is just FILLED with boring jokes about women touching his big staff, and that the staff is so rigid etc. Etc. Etc.

I can't take it! I'm supposed to be younger than this guy but he feels like a child who's seen candy for the first time. Completely unlikeable MC, not that he has much of a personality except "wow, she's hot".

Can't blame the voice actors, that part is pretty good.

Also, the female "guide" is just looking at him amused when he clearly wants to shag everyone. Including her. And he keeps questioning if she's into bdsm. Is this supposed to be smut without story? Because I missed that tag somewhere..

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Very disappointing.

Might suit an adolescent boy? Too much gratuitous sex and bad language. Too little story line. Not worth downloading.

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Wow thats bad

Erm, so yeah.

hero commits murder as his first action and is joking about it at the end of the same scene.

MC 2/10
OC 4/10
Plot 3/10
XXX 1/10

No move on.

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